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Summer Meeting, Bless’ed Unity
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 10:48:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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At night the shadows gather round and stars fill the sky
We wish upon the moonbeams glow for a love to sit close by
A soul mate that will share our life and happiness abound
A kiss of sweet surrender as we lay close upon the dewy ground
Dew drops glisten like sparkling diamonds upon our grassy bed
While the summer breeze cools the days lingering heat
Listening to the silence of our thoughts as we forget everything that had been said
And it is within these dreams where star-crossed lovers do meet
In the moments of the twilight hour two hearts spill free
Mesmerized in loves fire carrying away into the galaxy
In the softness of the shadows blushing lips do meet under the old oak tree
As two hearts, two souls, and two bodies intertwine in ecstasy
Starry eyes stare upon glistening bodies lying still in steamy breath
Dreaming of eternity together beyond the grave, beyond the hand of Death
The world around them they care not, only for the other’s caress
As their union under heaven the stars and moon do bless
Michelle and Rich
2008
Copyright ©
ingeniusidiot
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Re: Summer Meeting, Bless’ed Unity
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by wizard on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 11:48:45 PM AEST
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very nice,
i enjoyed this a lot,
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Re: Summer Meeting, Bless’ed Unity
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 12:00:05 AM AEST
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This piece is a winner. Excellent job.
Deadwriter
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Re: Summer Meeting, Bless’ed Unity
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by EloquentDegenerate on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 03:39:31 AM AEST
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Very nicely written...Some great descriptions...favorite lines "Dew drops glisten like sparkling diamonds upon our grassy bed" and "In the softness of the shadows blushing lips do meet under the old oak tree
" creates a geat vision |
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Re: Summer Meeting, Bless’ed Unity
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 04:27:01 AM AEST
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Rich,
thanks so much for writing this with me and it did turn out to be a gem, prettier than I imagined.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Summer Meeting, Bless’ed Unity
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by emystar on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 05:40:32 AM AEST
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You two have written a perfect write.
Awesome.
Smiles, huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Summer Meeting, Bless’ed Unity
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 10:58:45 AM AEST
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Ok you two, you had me saying wow from
just the title. Then I read it and wow. then
took it apart, 1st line, 3rd line - 2nd line, 4th
line,all three of these poems are just
incredible writes. You two are a winner apart
and together.........Mike |
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