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Sex Sells & Someones Gotta Pay The Bills..
Contributed by
amber_vonhorror
on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 09:20:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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im undaunted, its erie
a backstreet. a tight pair of nets
wrapped delicately around her legs
blisters like cigarette burns,
they glow in the streetlight
hand it over. my mistress. shes everything
heavy mascara, blinking aches
nobody knows shes crying underneath that face
we’re not pretty anymore
shes only a ***** street whore
a nobody.
Cheap thrill? Almost.
Sex sells, and somebodys gotta pay the bills
Im not so sure. Does she get her lines for free
Now shes just staring at me
And i cant turn away
In between her legs theres a dull ache
She hides her pain.
Just a whore. Nothing more.
And nobody expects her to ever be.
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amber_vonhorror
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2008-07-10 21:20:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sex Sells & Someones Gotta Pay The Bills..
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 11:50:54 PM AEST (User
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sounds like a movie i saw once...
nicely done,
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Re: Sex Sells & Someones Gotta Pay The Bills..
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadwriter on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 06:01:23 AM AEST (User
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Interesting piece. Well written.
Deadwriter
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Re: Sex Sells & Someones Gotta Pay The Bills..
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 12:55:36 PM AEST (User
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Interesting write, I felt a mix of torn emotions in these lines. Nicely done
Michelle |
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Re: Sex Sells & Someones Gotta Pay The Bills..
(User Rating: 1 ) by purplestary on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 05:13:04 PM AEST (User
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this was indeed a very interesting topic..it was written well. wasnt quit what i expected when i first opend it but thats good i think..lol. anyways... nice job. |
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Re: Sex Sells & Someones Gotta Pay The Bills..
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnastasiaN on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 08:21:07 AM AEST (User
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Fabulous...well written |
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Re: Sex Sells & Someones Gotta Pay The Bills..
(User Rating: 1 ) by a7x36 on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 04:59:03 PM AEST (User
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So raw, I absolutely love it.
So many life stories that are seldom told. |
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Re: Sex Sells & Someones Gotta Pay The Bills..
(User Rating: 1 ) by sometime_around_midnight on
Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 01:24:20 AM AEST (User
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wow that was a very strong well written peace. thank you for sharing it with us. |
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Re: Sex Sells & Someones Gotta Pay The Bills..
(User Rating: 1 ) by sometime_around_midnight on
Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 01:31:30 AM AEST (User
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wow that was a very strong well written peace. thank you for sharing it with us. |
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