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Down at the beach
Contributed by
jamboma
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Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 08:58:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Working so hard
So dull and tedious
Hypnotized by the clock
But the hands are frozen
How long can I carry on
Such a hectic and busy day
All this stress for such little pay
Now it’s finally over
I stroll on down
Cold sand tickling my feet
The sun sinking away
Just me and the sea
Alone with time to think
What a way to end the day
Down on the beach at Bramblebush bay
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2008-07-10 20:58:37]
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Re: Down at the beach
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by emystar on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 05:49:02 AM AEST
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wow,
You make me miss my tarzan.
Beautifull work and welcome to our global family here at ypdc.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Down at the beach
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 12:34:00 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc,
I loved this poem it sounds like you ended your hectic day on a good note, I want to go to the sea also so near yet so far away dang it.
Enjoyable write
Michelle |
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