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Its just how i feel
Contributed by
Tashy
on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 03:44:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I watch you from the window
I see your fantastic glow
In your room you bounce around
Now my heart begins to pound
Though i may not be too close
I will never be too far
That light that shines within you
Is so bright it is untrue
All i want is to be held
I wish for our hearts to meld
The euphoria i feel
Just from looking at your face
Makes me reach for the blue skies
Once again my heart must rise
Loving you is so easy
Even if only to me
My love for you is so strong
I feel nothing can go wrong
Now to finish all this off
I must give my final words
I need you
&
I love you
Copyright ©
Tashy
... [
2008-07-10 15:44:24]
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Re: Its just how i feel
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 05:57:30 AM AEST
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A nice write. I hope it was well received by them.
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Re: Its just how i feel
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by EloquentDegenerate on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 05:57:31 AM AEST
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| Simple but beautiful...I can feel the emotion. Thanks! |
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Re: Its just how i feel
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by juliestevens18 on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 04:47:55 PM AEST
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| 2nd poem i have read by you.. good job, I really liked the emotion in this write.. nice |
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