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Contributed by
fallensilence
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Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:40:00 AM in AEST
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tired of trying to fill you
insatiable hunger
sick of trying to please you
when you never even speak
so is this through?
i dont think im trying anymore
im sorry.
but its not like you ever read this anyway.
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fallensilence
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2003-03-17 03:40:00]
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Re: one
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:59:40 AM AEST
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| Whether I read you or not do not care me.. well I read it .. you have to break your silence as usual. venkat |
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Re: one
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 07:18:09 AM AEST
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| i'd love to know what or who this is about - i really liked this, simple language but with a hidden depth. great write as always, Kate x |
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Re: one
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 12:34:05 PM AEST
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| great write dude. can totally feel the emotion in this one, like a yearning. brilliant. gonna read more of your stuff now. thanks for the read, T. |
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