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Listen, Can You Hear It?
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 04:24:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The winds of change blow quickly
Life an open door
Hearts torn and bleeding
Dust lay forgotten on floor
Smoke and mirrors leave us
Wondering where we have been
Remembrances of love
Shadows of our sins
There are those who come and go
Never leaving a mark
Then there are those who
Forever are engraved on our heart
Through times tough or gentle
The mind can not forget
The laughter and the tears
Always with us set
To friends and family I have loved
I keep you always near
Eternally you walk with me
Never should you fear
Though winds of change blow quickly
Steadfast is my spirit
My song ever swept your way
Listen, can you hear it?
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2008-07-09 16:24:04]
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Re: Listen, Can You Hear It?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 11:51:52 PM AEST
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Shari, this was completely beautiful. A lovely tribute to
the value and sincerity of your love/friendship.
I adore the last stanza completely ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Listen, Can You Hear It?
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by shelby on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 01:25:57 AM AEST
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Shari,
this is so beautiful it made me cry.
Yes I can hear it, I love you Shari.
Hugs
Michelle
aka little star
pssssss did you get my message about our Crow?
Guess what Crows are here this morning, WOW |
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Re: Listen, Can You Hear It?
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by GreenEves16 on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 06:53:40 AM AEST
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nice tribute,
very heartfelt |
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Re: Listen, Can You Hear It?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 11:26:51 AM AEST
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Shari, it is great to see words from you again.
I have always loved your writes and this is
no exception. This poem is so deep and
heart felt. Wonderful write......Mike |
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Re: Listen, Can You Hear It?
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 09:51:06 AM AEST
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What an absolutely beautiful tribute to friendship and family. A heart warming write....
May you always be surrounded by both..
Hugs
Jenni |
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