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~ABSENCE~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 01:34:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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~~^~~
Think not that time nor distance
Will make me forget.
For if I forget you,
Nothing will I remember.
Time will pass..
And we may be apart
But never shall my love for you end.
In my love for you,
I shall die,
And be raised,
And be stronger!!
~~^~~
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Jenni_K
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2008-07-09 13:34:37]
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Re: ~ABSENCE~
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 02:42:10 PM AEST
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nice...if u remember someone special even through absence/distance of that person and/or of yourself, now that's something! Keep that connection going. I like the 1st 4 lines esp. take care...
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Re: ~ABSENCE~
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by ZiggyB on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 09:13:17 PM AEST
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Jenni,
I can't believe this one...it is beautiful.
I just love it.
~Stephan |
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Re: ~ABSENCE~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 11:42:38 PM AEST
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Holy heck woman!!!
This is so damn beautiful and endearing! This is what it means to truly love.
The last four lines especially capture the essence of unconditional love.
A remarkable piece of art, Jenni. Gorgeously breathtaking!
*sigh*
~Breezy
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Re: ~ABSENCE~
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by shelby on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 06:43:06 AM AEST
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you captured true and hope in this write beautiful
Michelle |
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Re: ~ABSENCE~
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 10:51:56 PM AEST
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A most beautiful write Jenni. Truly a piece from your heart.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~ABSENCE~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 11:29:34 AM AEST
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| Jenni, with so few words, you have said so much. So deep with feeling..........Mike |
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