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A Full Moon
Contributed by
Ambivalence
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Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 01:10:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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In clouds of darkness,
A pleasant full moon rises
With the shining stars.
Copyright ©
Ambivalence
... [
2008-07-09 13:10:13]
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Re: A Full Moon
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 02:59:01 PM AEST
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nicely done
wiz |
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Re: A Full Moon
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by ZiggyB on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 09:23:28 PM AEST
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Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Stephan |
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Re: A Full Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 11:54:29 PM AEST
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Very lovely haiku. The trick with this form of poetry is to
say much with very little. You've done an excellent job. You set
a scene with few words, but the emotion and beauty it created
is vast!
Great job!
~Breezy |
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Re: A Full Moon
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 11:32:07 AM AEST
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You have painted such a beautiful picture
with just 13 words. Very well done....Mike |
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Re: A Full Moon
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by LauraMary on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 07:00:08 AM AEST
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| Beautiful. |
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Re: A Full Moon
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 11:38:41 AM AEST
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beautiful !!
hugs n' love nessa |
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