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~China Doll~
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 02:13:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I look upon something a bit fractured, a tiny crack in the little china doll.
Wishing to pick something up so precious and hold her in my hands.
Fragile yet strong, withstanding the world spinning round.
A story book moment written within the spark cast in her brown eyes.
China doll sits still, a silent tear stuck behind sparking eyes.
Satin dress and hair dancing in blossom laden breeze.
Where stars in the heavens twinkle and the dust glitters in her hair.
She shines and lights the shadows, magical in her way.
Shall I protect the china doll, who is not as fragile as I may think?
Or let her sit awhile in peace and lose herself to wishful things.
Bask in the ray of her aura and know in a small amount of time
that the magic shall be spread, all will be fine.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-07-08 14:13:46]
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Re: ~China Doll~
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by eeeitak on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 03:24:04 PM AEST
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| oh this is amazing; the seconf stanza is especially remarkable in my opinion, with the descriptions and everything!! GREAT WRITE! :] |
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Re: ~China Doll~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 08:12:50 PM AEST
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Another amazing piece...and you say that I write better than you do....by this example right here I dont see how that could be true.
You have done a brilliant job here. I particularly like the last stanza...Ive looked at a few people in that way and have come to find out that they are stronger than I am. Beautiful.
~HUGS~
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Re: ~China Doll~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 10:29:01 PM AEST
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Wonderful write Michelle.
Your words create a picture to
behold in the mind of this reader.
Mike |
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Re: ~China Doll~
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 12:38:03 AM AEST
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Wow, Michelle... a wonderful job here... Great analogy used.....and yes,, all will be fine for this china doll...she is strong....
Hugs
Jenni
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Re: ~China Doll~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 01:05:31 AM AEST
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this is just enchanting.. I loved the flow and the imgery is clever.. awesome job here
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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