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This Pen
Contributed by
EloquentDegenerate
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 03:30:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Won't you please love me so I can love myself?
Won't you please need me like I need someone else?
I felt your love come and go
Like the puddles of water left after the snow
This pen still bleeds this black ink
Not a shade brighter day
Fleeting colors of light sent through the gray
Won't you please love me so I can love myself?
Won't you please need me like I need someone else?
What eye does it take to see the beauty inside
For a comforting arm in which to confide
This pen still bleeds...
Can't you see past the anxiety your presence brings
This struggling star trying to shine its own things
Won't you please love me so I can love myself?
Won't you please need me like I need someone else?
When the price to feel becomes to much to afford
Cause you haven't been blessed with enough love's accord
This pen still...
And tears still do fall
Waiting for a voice to call
Won't you please love me so I can love myself?
Won't you please need me like I need someone else?
You have to much love to put in one place
To these beautiful flowers lies an unnoticed vase
This pen...
It lends an invitation to your welcome
Resilience...I hope I still have some
Won't you please stop this ink from bleeding?
Copyright ©
EloquentDegenerate
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2008-07-08 03:30:34]
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Re: This Pen
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 04:00:54 AM AEST
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very nicely done,
i can feel the sadness emanating through this..
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Re: This Pen
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 04:08:29 AM AEST
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You mirror the lonely heart so well, different circumstance but I still feel this so deeply.
It is sad, but beautiful.
Michelle |
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Re: This Pen
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 06:53:07 AM AEST
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| a great write i love the way the words flow and the style is great |
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Re: This Pen
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by eeeitak on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 09:10:18 AM AEST
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| this is so creative and so emotional and so original and AH i just love it!!! :] |
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Re: This Pen
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by brew on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 12:36:51 PM AEST
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Left speechless....In awe, to such extremety of words.......
brew~ |
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