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The Cobweb
Contributed by
wheels
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Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 01:33:13 PM in AEST
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I’m caught
In the confusing cobwebs of laws
Fluttering helplessly in the wind
Struggling to wrench myself
From the sticky binding silk
Wanting to be free
Fluttering helplessly in the wind
While the three-piece suits gather to feast.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-07-07 13:33:13]
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Re: The Cobweb
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by sprinter27 on
Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 02:04:24 PM AEST
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Wow. Short, but amazingly awesome and true: a picture may be worth a thousand words, but short sometimes is better 'cause attention is caught and it shows you know how to express your thoughts and get the point across. But i agree, gov't is great- but they don't have to control every movement. Great work of art! Keep up the work!!
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Re: The Cobweb
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 04:12:52 AM AEST
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Kevin,
oh I understand this one. Damn people!
It is powerful and so prolific.
It will be better just keep looking to the top of the peak.
Hugs
Michelle
thanks for everything by the way
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