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Tying every artery that gave life
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
on
Sunday, 6th July 2008 @ 10:33:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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No remorse for what you have done,
tearing everything apart with your razor tongue.
Never a thought of what would have be left,
after you’ve completed your verbal mission of death…
You ripped everything apart in your reach,
with your hurtful words, you send all to plunder.
Your words…
they cut like a knife,
tying every artery that gave life.
Destructive voice…
The call of thunder;
send shivers down my spine.
Your words cloaked in darkness,
left scars; like railway lines across my heart.
You ripped everything apart in your reach,
with your hurtful words, you send all to plunder.
Your words…
they cut like a knife,
tying every artery that gave life.
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Oceandreamer
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2008-07-06 22:33:32]
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Re: Tying every artery that gave life
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by wizard on
Sunday, 6th July 2008 @ 11:55:46 PM AEST
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nicely done,
a very strong piece,
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Re: Tying every artery that gave life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 12:28:47 AM AEST
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OUCH!
Od, this was so well written. Very biting and with a bold attitude! I love
the metaphor of words being like a razor/knife!
I have been in this place .. hopefully your work is as therapeutic for
you as mine is to me. :) Great post, my friend!!
~Breezy
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Re: Tying every artery that gave life
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 12:50:26 AM AEST
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"Destructive voice…
The call of thunder;
send shivers down my spine.
Your words cloaked in darkness,
left scars; like railway lines across my heart."
Yikes!! This must hurt! I hope the venting helps.... Well done..
Jenni
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Re: Tying every artery that gave life
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by emystar on
Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 12:48:14 PM AEST
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Woo, I agre with every one else.
very powerfull strong write.
huggs,
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