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To those that give such good advice
Contributed by
taffimai
on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Thank you for your words of Council
I’m sure you’re right, you know me so well
Though perhaps if I may be so bold
Here’s a thought with which I hold
Those who advise without delay
Just result in taking away
The power of those who need relief
Mucking around with their self belief
The people whose advice is best
Are those who wait first for a request
For help, then proceed to lend a hand
This you do if you’re a good friend
Copyright ©
taffimai
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2003-03-17 01:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: To those that give such good advice
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:45:01 AM AEST (User
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alll right, welldone.. venkat |
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Re: To those that give such good advice
(User Rating: 1 ) by mckayla on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 01:19:06 PM AEST (User
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True!! Wonderful poem!!
mckayla
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Re: To those that give such good advice
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 07:02:44 PM AEST (User
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I have foud the best solution
don't make too much contribition
simply help them find their way
the more they do, the less you say. |
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Re: To those that give such good advice
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 07:04:23 PM AEST (User
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missed out the "n" in found sorry |
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Re: To those that give such good advice
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 04:23:00 PM AEST (User
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this is an excellent poem, with a great message, warm welcome to ypdc too, i look forward to more of your poetry:) hugs nessa |
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