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This Remains
Contributed by
drummerchic18
on
Sunday, 6th July 2008 @ 03:08:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A kiss that haunts me for forever
A lifetime that can never be true
A tortured soul
a misplaced identity
This is all that is left of a girl you once knew
You took me by surprise
and I came running back to you
You redeemed your lies
only to cut me once again
Here I stand
This is all that remains
The girl that once stood strong
THe girl that once stood proud
Who cared about everyone
and lended a hand to anyone
She is no longer living
She can never be revived
This is me, spent and restless
Tired of the pain and tired of the lies
Can you deal with me
Can you look me in the eye
Do you see what went wrong inside?
Please tell me how to fix
The girl that was left behind.
You just breathe my name
and it sends shivers down my spine
You took my innocence away
and fed me tasteful lies
You cannot look at my the same
For this is all that remains
The girl that once stood strong
The girl that once stood proud
Who cared about everyone
and lended a hand to anyone
She is no longer living
She can never be revived
This is me, spent and restless
Tired of the pain and tired of the lies
Can you deal with me
Can you look me in the eye
Do you see what went wrong inside?
Please tell me how to fix
The girl that was left behind.
You have no one to blame
for the reason i am so cold to you
You took my heart away
it doesn't belong to you
I still care for you, my love
and i still dream about you
But you shattered me
and left me to bleed on my own
So this is who remains
The girl that once stood strong
The girl that once stood proud
Who cared about everyone
and lended a hand to anyone
She is no longer living
She can never be revived
This is me, spent and restless
Tired of the pain and tired of the lies
Can you deal with me
Can you look me in the eye
Do you see what went wrong inside?
Please tell me how to fix
The girl that was left behind.
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Re: This Remains
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th July 2008 @ 05:35:05 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
You can be stronger than you was before, in time.
Hang tuff and know that he's the looser, not you. I know it might not seem that way to you now but you gotta have faith in yourself.
Trust me, I know the feelings.
luv, huggs, prayer, peace,
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Re: This Remains
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 08:38:38 AM AEST
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Wow... An intense,sad and powerful write!
Vey well expressed!
Draws you right in...
Thanks for sharing.
~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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