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On a mat or pier.
Contributed by
Strontium90
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Saturday, 5th July 2008 @ 06:05:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Jimtolglock Von Bungerscotch, had a thing for peeled bananas.
He kept them in his underpants, his shoes and his pyjamas.
When he walked he squelched and slurped and when he sat he squished.
And when he climbed the stair to bed, he sounded like a Fish.
‘A Fish?’ I hear you cry aloud. ‘A Fish don’t sound! What tosh!’
Oh yes it do, and I’ll tell you how. A fish sounds ‘splashy splosh’.
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Re: On a mat or pier.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Saturday, 5th July 2008 @ 01:45:22 PM AEST (User
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excellent play on theme and form, without losing the quality endearing to a child's ear.
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