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So You Might Not Hear Me.
Contributed by
miseria
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Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 08:55:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Spoken all in silence, deprived of sound.
Spoken in disbelief, words don't make sense anymore.
Do I listen to the earliest winds?
Do I see the morning moths?
My only tree stands as my only friend.
A fantastic conversation ends in awkward silence.
I believe we have never met, and I believe we never will.
I cannot hear the earliest winds,
I cannot see the morning moths.
My tree has fallen, my friends' betrayal.
So you might not hear me, when I say..
Nothing. Absolutely nothing.
Copyright ©
miseria
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2008-07-04 08:55:48]
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Re: So You Might Not Hear Me.
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by shelby on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 09:26:41 AM AEST
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I felt many things while reading this. You captured such depth with few words. Nice work here.
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Re: So You Might Not Hear Me.
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 09:42:36 AM AEST
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A wonderful write... written with such poise....
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Re: So You Might Not Hear Me.
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by Thespia on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 08:21:53 PM AEST
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Lovely, youve captured something that i believe everyone feels at some point in life.
Thank you for posting this beautiful poem.
Sarah |
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Re: So You Might Not Hear Me.
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by elle on
Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 03:46:58 PM AEST
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| a delicate composition that speaks to me of repose & acceptance. beautifully shared. peace. elle |
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