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Unanswered
Contributed by
LoveStruck_Hippie
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Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 07:38:20 AM in AEST
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Speak freely
But don’t utter a word
The voice inside persistent
Taunting, urging
The silent scream
Soft whispers
From a long forgotten place
Begging sheepishly for release
Hush, child …
Now is not your time
Adolescent anger
Rages against the walls
Begging for release
Paralyzed, stunted
Padded cell encased
Prolific realization
Pathetic regurgitation
Jaded, sedated
Realistically hated
Fated revelations
Today is forgotten
Tomorrow just a dream
The past meets the present
Futures yet unseen
So now… it waits
Unanswered
Shannon Musser
07/03/2008
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2008-07-04 07:38:20]
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Re: Unanswered
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by GreenEves16 on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 08:03:01 AM AEST
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| Hmmmm very nice and sounds like something i would write, very nicely written |
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Re: Unanswered
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 08:25:35 AM AEST
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The last verse...especially the line--->
"The past meets the present" really jumped out at me...it's where I am at present...
Loved this..
Jenni |
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Re: Unanswered
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by shelby on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 09:02:34 AM AEST
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Shannon,
I felt this deeply hun. The pic went with the words so well. It stings a bit to read knowing the pain you are going through. Never fear I am always here for you.
I wish I could do more for you to take away the pain and hurt.
I always enjoy the depth of your writing.
You are smart, beautiful, talented and the list go fill a page.. Remember that and all those who love you!
love you sis
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Michelle |
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Re: Unanswered
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 10:47:58 AM AEST
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| Wow, I like the way it reads. So much power in these words. Great write..........Mike |
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Re: Unanswered
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 06:08:12 PM AEST
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| Verry interesting piece, and I think your ending in particular gave it that extra 'something' that made me like this poem so much. Excellent job. |
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Re: Unanswered
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by wizard on
Sunday, 6th July 2008 @ 11:50:59 PM AEST
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nicely done LSH,
this reminds me a lot of everyone of my days...lol
great post,
wiz |
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Re: Unanswered
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 12:23:51 AM AEST
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Oh
my
G O D !!!!
DAMN fine work here hun! I know exactly how this is and I know
just how you must have felt when writing it. There is a silent torture
dancing among the words that anyone would be a FOOL not to see.
I hope for release for you soon and I hope for a bright, beautiful
and WELL deserved future for you, too!! I love this piece. It's audacious
and brave. Like you, my dear friend. ^_^
love, hugs and peace,
~Breezy
(who LOVES the pic you put with it) |
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Re: Unanswered
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 05:23:09 AM AEST
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It reminds me of the story about the three blind men and the elephant. Each one feeling a diffrent part of the whole, each one forming his own impression based on what he feels/ experiences, none of them ever comprehending the whole.
We all have so many questions regarding life, some of which will never be answered because we'll never understand the whole picture.
All we can do is go through life having faith that things are working out as they should.
Sometimes it just ain't easy.... |
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Re: Unanswered
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 08:45:35 AM AEST
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This poem reminds me of a favorite dessert. You get enjoyment seeing it as a whole. Then tasting it, the different textures and tastes create different pleasures in different ways.
It is a good poem, beautiful and tasteful in many ways.
Carol |
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by calebcrain on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 03:50:46 AM AEST
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i liked your word choice especially in the second last stanza . great poem
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Re: Unanswered
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 10:56:13 AM AEST
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Today is forgotten Tomorrow
just a dream The past meets
the present Futures yet unseen
So now… it waits Unanswered . . .
love the above verse, simply a beautiful
honest piece of writting, your poetry is
artisticaly fortifying to the heart and soul
of the readers imagination,
Peace 2u my friend keep up
the great writing, take care . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: Unanswered
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 06:36:59 PM AEST
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deeply beautiful expression,
hugs n' love nessa |
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