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~ The Cross road~
Contributed by
shelby
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Thursday, 3rd July 2008 @ 01:39:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It could almost be a nightmare, that leaves you fearing sleep.
The moment when you are running, but stuck in invisible quicksand.
Road, pitch as tar, no moon or stars for guides,
an inner rumbling volcano where hurt and unrest reside.
Feeling spooked in your own skin, wearing uncertainty like a glove.
Suffocating silence where answers do not seem to come.
A web wrapped tight around you, holding your arms to your sides,
not knowing whom to trust, or where to run and hide.
The wolf in lambskin knocking at your door, rattling the locks.
Wearing the mask of someone you love but are they who they say they are?
It is everything mixed up, and scrambled into one lone pile.
The end of the road at the cross road, no signs no moon no stars.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-07-03 13:39:57]
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Re: ~ The Cross road~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 3rd July 2008 @ 08:21:58 PM AEST
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Nice piece...deep and emotional.
Been there alot lately.
And if I may ask....who would the wolf be??
Once again nice write.
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Re: ~ The Cross road~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd July 2008 @ 10:42:55 PM AEST
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| Agreed, deep emotion wrapped in turmoil. I hope you once again find peace.....Great write......Mike |
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Re: ~ The Cross road~
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 3rd July 2008 @ 10:49:32 PM AEST
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Nice write...hope the path chosen is right
~Stephan |
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Re: ~ The Cross road~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 02:02:12 AM AEST
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wow a very powerful intense write.. I always enjoy what you write though.. thanks for sharing.. this is magnificant
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: ~ The Cross road~
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 02:54:58 AM AEST
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Michelle,
You know just how this hit me. A very intense, emotional piece.
Thanks again for being there.
Peace
~Shannon |
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