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It is time to go our own home

Contributed by holy on Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 03:00:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

It is time to go to our own home

Today is our baby's birthday,

he is one year old now,

I presented him with a box of building blocks.

How fast the time flies!

this afternoon,

he put them into different shape,

and pushed me to see his masterpiece.

How nice!

I gave him a lift and awarded him a kiss.

Now,

you are still busy outside,

did you have lunch?

Last night,

when I told you I decided to go to our own home,

I could see you were too excited to say have a wonderful time.

Yes,

it is time to go to our own home.

we have built a new house for my brothers,

now my mother is in much better shape.

to my surprise,

I have weaned our baby away from mother's milk with success.

Everything is going so well,

it is our luck,

we should go home to do our best for our parents.

I don't care if I will be more busy,

to give you a good mood every day is my duty.

About my family,

don't worry.

I can take great care of them too,

for my office is so close to mother's home.

Really,

my mother wanted me to repay your family too.

Since we married,

my family depends on us financially,

it has been a millstone round your neck,

but you always say not to care,

I can't express how grateful I am,

but give you my love.

It is getting dark,

it is time to go home,

I will fix dinner and wait for you.

Dear,

don't get too tired,

drive slowly and safely,

come back early,

XXX

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-07-02 15:00:02]
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Re: It is time to go our own home (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Thursday, 3rd July 2008 @ 01:34:27 AM AEST
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sometimes we give more than we want,,but it's worth it,yes sometimes going home is better,,
a friend in words,,spooky

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