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~Secret Place~
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 01:38:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Moonbeams glow end of day
all sad thoughts drift away
floating to the stars up high
residing where the angels sigh.
We borrowed wings from Angel friends.
Drifted peaceful around the bend
where moonbeams waved and stars put on a show.
Casting us in milky-ways pale blue glow.
Our journey took us to a field.
Where daisies dance and truth spilled.
Every trouble floated in hushed air.
Nature heard us talking, our secrets shared.
Hand in hand we walked along
like school age kids near the pond
Butterflies came along with us
painting the world with friendships love.
Skies blushed at us in the pink fashion
sunset kissed us with its passion
Our moon came back and showed her love
we grabbed hands once more and floated above.
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shelby
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2008-07-01 13:38:39]
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Re: ~Secret Place~
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by wheels on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 01:57:50 PM AEST
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Thx Michelle. It is lovely.
--Kevin
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Re: ~Secret Place~
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 02:19:59 PM AEST
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Awww..Lovely and blissful write, Mich...
Loved it.. Now off to bed while the tranquility of this is still in my head....
Hugs
Jen |
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Re: ~Secret Place~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 08:10:55 PM AEST
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Lovely write. You have more of a knack for these than I do now...But as I have been saying " Only God and time will tell"
Another beautifula dn touching piece.
Rich |
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Re: ~Secret Place~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 09:52:32 PM AEST
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Re: ~Secret Place~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 09:57:39 PM AEST
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Another beautiful write Michelle. I floated along with every line. I used "moonbeams" in a poem once and wondered if it was even a word. Though the visual of the word comes out so strong in this piece, to me at least..........Mike |
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Re: ~Secret Place~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 10:08:24 PM AEST
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Michelle, this was so very soft and breezy. It makes the reader just want
to close their eyes and float up their with you . .. dreaming and sighing
with every moonbeam. I love how it comes full circle, starting with soaring
through the universe to the daisies field and the sunset and then back again
to soar above. Just beautiful. The last stanza is gorgeous!!
*smiles*
~Breezy
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Re: ~Secret Place~
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by brew on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 07:09:20 AM AEST
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Yes very airy and wanting to float to a place where things can be "all" Perfect,(at least to what one sees it as being that). Loved this
brew~ |
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