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striving for an escape
Contributed by
KY
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Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 12:42:51 PM in AEST
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have you ever felt like there was no escape
you cant think of anything else to do
you try so hard to find a way out
but pain still finds a way to control you
theres nothing you can really do
it just tears you up inside
life just feels like a road trip
we're all just along for the ride
stuck in this dark, painful shadow
feeling so stuck and trapped
wishing one day things will get better
i cant take anymore of this crap
i wonder if it will ever get better
everyone says they'd break my fall
so many lies and pretending
i just wanna say ***** it and end it all
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KY
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2008-07-01 12:42:51]
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Re: striving for an escape
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 01:23:44 PM AEST
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WOW!! This is really good... I can feel your pain in this... Hope it gets better.....
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Re: striving for an escape
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by wheels on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 04:58:05 PM AEST
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Very emotional. I can relate - there are are some really ugly hurtful people, oh but who to turn to or if it matters. But it does. You have some deep thoughts here.
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