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RESTLESSNESS
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 12:30:27 PM in AEST
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We find we have lost all thoughts
Cant seem to think
Cant seem to fault
Cant seem to do anything....lately
I find ,I am lost to all
I think , I am giving too much for nothing
So why I am here?
....I do not know....!!
From my minds being, I have given up.
Maybe I need to stop...and just LIVE!
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brew
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Re: RESTLESSNESS
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 01:18:48 PM AEST
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Hey Brew....tough write..but nicely said... I can identify at the moment..
How is our mutual friend doing? Please say hi for me..
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Re: RESTLESSNESS
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by wheels on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 01:27:38 PM AEST
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A good in-the-moment write. I can relate.
--Kevin
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Re: RESTLESSNESS
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 02:59:34 PM AEST
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nice write dana,
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Re: RESTLESSNESS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 10:11:39 PM AEST
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| Great write. Take the last line and run with it. It worked for me...........Mike |
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Re: RESTLESSNESS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 10:15:01 PM AEST
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Sweet Dayna .. you are a remarkable person hun with SO much to give!
It is a question that haunts us, you know? Are we getting the satisfaction out of
what we are giving just for the sake of giving it? Or do we need, from time to
time, a sort of validation that we are appreciated? I think it is both and it's
at the times when we feel the latter that this question poses itself to our
hearts.
You are beautiful and should do what makes you happy. =)
Don't ever change!
*huge hugs*
~Breezy
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Re: RESTLESSNESS
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 05:25:04 AM AEST
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It's tough sometimes to figure out which is the right way to go...are we missing something?
Sometimes I think if we stop, close our eyes and feel our way, we really do know, deep down inside, the right way to go. |
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Re: RESTLESSNESS
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by wheels on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 09:41:19 AM AEST
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I like the unique style of ponderance I have thus read in your work. (sorry I have been absent in my reading - self struggles as well) anyways - I can really feel where you are coming from; and thusfar, we are on the same page.
--kevin
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Re: RESTLESSNESS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 05:36:04 PM AEST
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Beautiful work, a window in which to gaze
from, pondering endlessly into the heart
and soul of life . . .
Ben |
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