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corridors of blackened souls
Contributed by
shelby
on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 05:31:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Doorways reveal a realm unknown
Unseen to others, unbelievable things I have been shown
A kingdom vast that over countless ages has grown
Becoming more beautiful as storm surges past have blown
Embracing the beauty of the ominous clouds
gathering around me like darkened shrouds
tempting me to the very core
rupturing the soul and all it fought for.
Sorrowful cries echo through cavernous halls
Memories hang upon shadowed castle walls
Searching for its way out, a wandering soul
Talking to no one but shadows upon the ceiling has taken its toll
Through the tears we see only black.
We ramble through hallways of hurt and abuse.
Searching for the moments we lost.
Another doorway dare we go? Or rest in our painted shrouds of dark?
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-07-01 05:31:12]
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Re: corridors of blackened souls
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 05:41:35 AM AEST
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I had almost forgotten this one. I think that we were planning on adding more but never got the chance.
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Re: corridors of blackened souls
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 05:44:51 AM AEST
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Rich,
yes I think you are right. Well we can begin again on another one we finish. I still think this one is good for one of the dark ones we had written, how about you?
Thanks you!
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Re: corridors of blackened souls
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 05:48:59 AM AEST
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You two write so well together... congrats on a brilliant piece..
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Re: corridors of blackened souls
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 10:15:33 PM AEST
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| Brilliant piece of writing, you two. Your flow is unmatched...................Mike |
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Re: corridors of blackened souls
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 05:58:48 AM AEST
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A great piece the two of you have here. It speaks with great meaning.
Deadwriter
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