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Underneath it all

Contributed by GreenEves16 on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 04:37:00 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Entering ones mind and seeing through their eyes
Ever knowing ever seeing ever feeling for freedom
Soft gentle light snow tops the trees, casting imaginations
Through your head

Walking beneath green pine canopy's blocking the
Sun yet comforting from within, the very core of
You jumping and leaping to get out and just this once
You let it

Let it feel the joy you have been screamig for
Let it be with the person you know the most
And knows you from your heart to your mind

Someone who needs no words to understand you
Who listens and quiets when you speak
To be yourself is a blessing that not many feel
But underneath in your heart you hear
Your true thoughts

Finally you let yourself just be, to be something
Never seen by others, never been released but
The feelings after waiting are stronger than imagined

Smells fill the senses the scent of pines and
Fresh air, no one knows what it feels to be all
Alone with canine and a trusting sister like figure
I sure dont

Lifting your head opening your eyes taking everything at a slow pace
Loving the feel of bark beneath gentle hands, glorifying
In the wet cold feel of snow

Seeking between the trees looking for details
But searching for nothing.
Canines running free barking and chaseing the still snow, walking on
Creaks falling but not touching water

Once upon a time when hopes seem lost you fought to find
Comfort but never discovering that
Happiness was right infront of your eye's

All you had to do was let it inside

Copyright © GreenEves16 ... [ 2008-07-01 04:37:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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