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amanda

Contributed by pipesmcgavin on Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 05:08:15 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

that rocket sailed into the heavens
i wonder what he saw as he rose
the sun twelve minutes past meridian
and not a cloud in the blue sky
and he arched back down to earth
from zenith to nadir,
nadeer,
nathir
along gravity's inevitable rainbow
i wonder what he saw then
the brown horizon
that gray blemish our camp
and did he see you?
a sand, at first, on the beach
growing bigger, and bigger, and bigger
but really, i want to know, did you see him?
did you?
out of the corner of your eye
the reflection on his aluminum jacket
a glint from the blue as time stood still?
did you see the needle from heaven
that brought you to hell?
i'm sorry i wasn't more help that day
baby, you had me at a loss
when i held you
you were upside down
and your eyes were open
did you see me?

Copyright © pipesmcgavin ... [ 2008-06-30 17:08:15]
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Re: amanda (User Rating: 1 )
by GreenEves16 on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 04:21:27 AM AEST
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oh my god this poem is really good, you....sort of seem a little sad in it though

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