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Enough!!!
Contributed by
GreenEves16
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Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 01:38:02 PM in AEST
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Enough is when things are repeated
When things never seem to change
But people always rewind and are conceited
Stuck on themselves never caring
For people around them are always changing
Enough is enough when people call you names
And never apologize
Forgiveness over and over again enough
Never again, no more, things need changing
People need explainings need talkings
Ambitious yet snooty, all together forming
No good full of themselves "people"
Try to forgive try to rewind...nothing
Fast forward repeated, over and over again
Never ceasing to surrender never
Seeming to care
Catches up grabs hold twists then backfires
Realization hits hard and fast like a ton of bricks
Smashed down trumped on and nothing
Enough, you will learn, you will listen
Listen to the words that they try to teach you
Listen to the lessons that you will learn
Listen to the voices that try to inform you
Listen to the cries of those who you have hurt
And after, feel the guilt and pain within
Reason with the owners
and they will try and forgive
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Re: Enough!!!
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by SamJoelle on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 02:41:03 PM AEST
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this sounds like you have some pretty rough feelings inside of you. like you were hurt.
i hope you feel somewhat better by wrighting this. |
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Re: Enough!!!
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 02:49:48 PM AEST
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Good vent..hope you get over these deep seated feelings....
Jenni |
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Re: Enough!!!
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by holy on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 03:03:25 PM AEST
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| Great! I love your poems. Yes, listen to the lessons that we will learn, listen to your words I have good feelings. |
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Re: Enough!!!
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by texasw97 on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 06:09:15 PM AEST
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| Man.. I guess someone really ticked you off. I to have a problem with a female friend of mine that continues to hit rewind when all I want to do is hit fast forward. But man..wow. Is all I can say about this piece..You might want to get you another remote control where you can just program your favorite channels.haha..But seriously though this was a nice piece. Take care |
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Re: Enough!!!
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by wheels on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 03:56:16 PM AEST
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A very well written vent. Love the fast forward rewind parts - so true the mistakes and offenses continuously repeated.
--Kevin
The lonely vagabond
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