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A Trance
Contributed by
XXXsilvervoodooXXX
on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Reaching through a mist of illusion, the air waving each hidden depth,
You are contemplating what screen will freeze next.
All is dim, revealing the shadows of a secretive new passage,
Your surrounding perceptions have started to close in.
Climbing the ladder that reflects burrows all through the skies,
You choose to question the flaming intention inside.
Diversion of possibilities flood through the enchantment around you,
The music will guard over the depths of your soul.
An roller coaster of insanity blindfolds logic and reasoning,
A fresh slave to feed from all of your wounds.
Persistent is the rush that can define each drifted new beginning,
You begin to lose another questioned breath.
Calmer, now the heavens glisten beneath the tracks of clear perspective,
Your mind has been put into trance, life has just begun.
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XXXsilvervoodooXXX
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2003-03-16 20:40:00]
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Re: A Trance
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 08:47:23 PM AEST
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Hmm...Interesting....
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Re: A Trance
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:17:32 PM AEST
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had to read more than once found it interesting.
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Re: A Trance
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:20:52 PM AEST
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| gives a floating feeling reading this....like you were in deep thought... |
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Re: A Trance
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:54:30 AM AEST
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| Damn this thing, the last four lines wrap the poem very neatly. venkat |
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Re: A Trance
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 09:12:55 AM AEST
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Wow... that's awesome! I agree with ladyfawn, definately a floating feeling to it!
Keep it up! |
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