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Meaning of Home
Contributed by
GreenEves16
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Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 10:48:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Home is something scary, something permanent
I will always be there tickling visions and depressing day's
Until you find yourself right outside that old shaggy roof
Childhoods filled with chores, filled with complaints
Fights which went unoticed by mother but touched upon by father
Changing things wont make them go away
Distracting wont make them stray
They always come back haunting but only looking for someone
to remember them
Walking around hand trailing over flaky white paint
Sighing then gasping as wood splits in your skin
You smile because it makes you cry
But tears which are not from sadness, neither from happiness
Tears just from the free feeling of you light heart and jolly mind
Nothing could tear you away from this one piece of mind that you
call your own
Some call home just where you live and sleep
Others say its where your pride lives and your shame stays
Yet most people say it's where you raise your kids
But my home is where the mind belongs and the eyes see
and the heart is free.
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Re: Meaning of Home
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 11:07:36 AM AEST
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| it does not lack it spreads a ppoetry like locust of passion. i love this with tremoring. it moves me solid like a water colded by artic clarity. it's a crab nebula of poetry. living lke the dream we all wax with jfk until truth comes wait |
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Re: Meaning of Home
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by SamJoelle on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 02:43:06 PM AEST
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this is amazing, it's true to the heart.
it's certainly not void of passion, you can tell you put your heart into this. good job friend. |
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Re: Meaning of Home
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by GreenEves16 on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 03:46:17 PM AEST
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i just wrote at the time the emmotions flowed through me
it did come from the heart |
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