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Humble Me
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
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I don't write great poetry, I write from the heart,
I don't expect to make profit, on the writing market,
I write what I feel, I write what I see as real,
I speak through my words, welcome to my world,
Mysteries of the heart, fore I'm just a small part,
Of this world that revolves around you Lord,
I don't ask for much, just a soft touch,
I was given this gift at birth, but didn't relize it until I was curse,
My first heartbreak, my thoughts then covered the paper like paint,
My tears ran free, but the emotions spoke so beauitifully,
But still I have room to improve, until then my gift stays locked in a room,
More and more I try, to the point of tears forming in my eyes,
I'm just a man, with a gift to write with a pen in my hand,
I wasn't blessed with a big vocabulary, just a gift to mix the words up passionately,
My words cut through stone, even more so now that I'm alone,
A soldier by trade, I pray my words will never fade,
Will I be remembered when I'm gone, or forgotten like a SoftCell song,
If I have any fans, this is to you I hope you understand,
My true name means Gift Of God, but I find that kind of odd,
The Phantom sounds more true, but my real name is Matthew.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2003-03-16 20:00:00]
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Re: Humble Me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 08:20:04 PM AEST
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Matt...you are truly a gift from God..no doubt about it... and your words are definitely from the heart..... I love your work..and I treasure your friendship... I pray for your safety and look forward to reading more of your inspirational work..
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Re: Humble Me
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:23:20 PM AEST
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words from the heart are like pearls they start out with something that irratates and are forever cherished for their beauty. Keep up writing I enjoy your words.
Sharon |
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Re: Humble Me
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:29:44 PM AEST
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| i love your poetry, all of it, im also happy to call you friend, you have been such a dear one to me, the fact that you have such insight into the world ..how can i say this right? your poet's heart, soul and mind come through in a very eloquent way to me, in every poem, you are able to see in a refreshing style, you are a gift to more people than you realize, this poem is very sweet and an honest expression, thank you, hugs n' love to you and yours, always nessa |
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Re: Humble Me
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by twinkletoes on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 11:47:01 PM AEST
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Matt...I have read your words, (More and more I try, to the point of tears forming in my eyes) I got to say to you that is what happens to me when I write. It shows me an inner longing to place those feelings onto paper and to make it right. Good on you mate, hope it all goes the way you want. I will make a prediction, judging by the sincere comments that others who know you better than I have placed, your words will be like your spirit, they will never fade.
TT
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Re: Humble Me
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 12:44:25 AM AEST
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| Anyone who writes with such emotion as you Matt, will always be remembered - all poetry from the heart is beautiful, as is yours. ... Jan |
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Re: Humble Me
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 09:21:57 AM AEST
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| Matt My words exactly thats how I feel,great write! Your work is loved by so many here,keep writing those beautiful peices with your pen! Christina |
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Re: Humble Me
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:04:38 PM AEST
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The best kind of poetry is what you feel in your heart. This is wonderful. Thankyou
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Re: Humble Me
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by karoody on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:49:54 AM AEST
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Anyone can put words on paper. Few can put their heart and soul on paper. You underestimate the power of words from the heart! Once again, thanx for sharing.
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