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Just Let Me Be

Contributed by suzy on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Each night I lay down and cry but you don't see the tears or pain that just keep building up inside. I've never let you see how weak I am when it comes to you. Never told you that every time you ask if I'm sad because of you that it's true. You don't even know how much control I've let you have over me. Why can't you just go away and please please just let me be. Let the tears fall where they will. Let the laughter turn shrill. Let my heart just stop loving you. Let me just stop feeling so blue. Most of all just let it pass quickly. I'm tired of hurting so please I'm begging won't you please just let me be?




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Re: Just Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 08:32:10 PM AEST
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Awwww Lasca...I sense so much hurt in this... I hope you are doing better now.. Please e-mail me....let's talk...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Just Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:26:37 PM AEST
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you pain is evident,, i have felt that way before,,i wish you better days and a love that brings you happiness

Sharon


Re: Just Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 12:52:05 AM AEST
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Can relate to these feelings so well ... nicely written, although I think if it was set out in poetry form it would be much easier to read, and you could emphasise your last line better - which is a really powerful line... Jan


Re: Just Let Me Be (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 02:01:37 AM AEST
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In my original submit it was set out in poem form don't know what happened to it from then to now but thank you anyways.

Lasca aka suzy


Re: Just Let Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 03:08:18 AM AEST
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hey i know what you're saying. i love someone but i don't want him to go no where. he doesn't want no one. it hurts to see someone with him if there would ever be but i don't want that so i fight for my love. i don't want no one to have him. i am so sad that i can't let it be.




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