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warning
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 06:57:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i look in your eyes
and fall deep,
i never have though
you would just leave...
pictures on the wall slowly fading
dripping grey paint on the floor...
the day is dying
as memories changing...
creating a black mess parfait
now look what you've done
I'm still brushing red strips stripes...
strokes of your mess
painted roughly out of warning!!!
Copyright ©
eternalsunshine
... [
2008-06-28 06:57:02]
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Re: warning
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 07:23:18 AM AEST
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You always write with such powerful passion.
Enjoyable and incredible write my friend.
I appreciate your talent.
Hugs
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Re: warning
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 08:37:56 AM AEST
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a very powerful passionate write.. i feel your pain here.. this is a very true write and it must be something in some men i had someone leave me too for no reason.. hope you have someone way better now.. this was a lovely write
rock on,
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Re: warning
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by Thespia on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 08:28:16 PM AEST
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Wonderful write,
so much passion, keep it up.
Sarah |
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