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this world is falling apart
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 10:18:52 PM in AEST
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As I wonder in the hall
I roam and think about it all
about why we're here everyday
why when i don't want to be here my life doesn't just die away
I've got all the time in the world
which doesn't add up much at all
because this place will soon fall
and no one can take the blame no one but us all
I've got all the time in the world
but it's not much at all
so I'm going to pace up and down this never ending hall
and think when will we notice
the world is falling apart
everyone will be lost even those close to our heart
this world is falling apart
and we don't have much time
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Voice of the Silent
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2008-06-27 22:18:52]
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Re: this world is falling apart
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by shelby on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 12:40:22 PM AEST
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I like the reference to time, it does pass us by so fast doesn't it?
Nice write with a good content to it.
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Re: this world is falling apart
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 04:01:31 PM AEST
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Very deep innervision.
Thought provoking.
huggs,
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