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~Her colors of blue~
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 11:10:26 AM in AEST
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She painted her colors of blue.
In shade’s no one had seen.
A mixture formed of pain
She wanted to rearrange.
She painted her colors of red.
The anger that formed in her soul,
knowing it could burn her to ash
she needed to let it go.
She painted her colors of pink.
The love that she knew she had.
The color that forms the rainbows
with people she meets and knows.
She painted her colors of formed pain.
Mixtures of every piece of her.
The good, bad, happy, sad,
grouped in colors array.
She tore her painting in pieces,
as she took upon the rocky cliff.
She tossed them to the coastal winds
Watched them float away with the sea.
~Michelle~
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shelby
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2008-06-27 11:10:26]
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Re: ~Her colors of blue~
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 11:31:22 AM AEST
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Aww Grrlfriend..I loved this..... Super write....
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Re: ~Her colors of blue~
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by eternalsunshine on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 12:35:31 PM AEST
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nice poem...enjoyed it
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Re: ~Her colors of blue~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 12:40:02 PM AEST
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a very artistic write.. very heartfelt and enjoyable.. makes ya think.. I Love this
rock on,
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Re: ~Her colors of blue~
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by wheels on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 03:12:21 PM AEST
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A lovely piece Michelle. Casting off her colors - shedding her past?
Huggs
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Re: ~Her colors of blue~
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 10:57:14 PM AEST
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Super write Michelle. Very well done.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Her colors of blue~
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 12:20:55 AM AEST
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There's such lovely imagery in this, and I loved the use of metaphor, a fine read,
2sdy x |
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