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Vanity
Contributed by
wheels
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Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 09:12:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I traveled to the corners
Of my mind trapped
Within a hollowed darkness
And scratched my initials
On the canyon walls
For later reference
Since today’s identities
Are secrets filtered through.
Like cigarette smoke
Where one loses oneself
In madness, pain,
And silicone boobs.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-06-27 09:12:12]
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Re: Vanity
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 10:54:07 AM AEST
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I will say it again I love the way your mind works.
You made me smile with this one. Not long but so full.
Huggers
Michelle |
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Re: Vanity
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 10:59:40 AM AEST
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| Agreed, you have a way with words unlike any other (thats good). Great write..................Mike |
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Re: Vanity
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 11:01:24 AM AEST
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Interesting write..really deep.....
The silicone boobs made me smile tho..
Jenni |
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Re: Vanity
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 08:40:42 AM AEST
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this is short but very powerfull love the wording in this
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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