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ALONE
Contributed by
Brian_K_Palmer
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Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here I am alone again;
Wishing I hadn=t drank that whole bottle of gin.
Now my life is oh so grim,
I wish I could find a woman that would just let me in.
I could make her happy and always grin
As I have so much love deep down within;
Some day somewhere you will be there,
Standing Right in front of me right out of thin air
I will know in my heart when it is true,
As you will appear right of the blue
Sent from above to share all my love
The most beautiful woman I=ve ever dreamed of.
So when we finely meet our love will be true,
As I am the one that is destined for you.
Life is to short for this not to be
I know your out there just waiting for me
As I will be looking for you
So please be looking for me
Copyright ©
Brian_K_Palmer
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2003-03-15 16:20:00]
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Re: ALONE
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by mckayla on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 07:13:59 PM AEST
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Very sweet! hopefully she will come to you soon!
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Re: ALONE
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 06:28:38 PM AEST
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| sincere, wishful and hopeful, i hope you find her too:) |
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Re: ALONE
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 08:44:43 PM AEST
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Lovely, sad write, Brian..best of luck!!
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Re: ALONE
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:10:19 PM AEST
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Brian
this is a heartfelt poem. Good things come to those who wait and I know you will find her soon.
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Re: ALONE
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 05:33:04 AM AEST
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I truly hope you find her and I am sure you will. From a poetry point of view, a lot of repetition again. If you are having trouble finding words that fit there is a really good rhyming dictionary. Just go to yahoo! and type in 'rhyming' and I think it is the first or second website. Then all you have to do is type in the word you are having trouble with and it will give you several options for words that rhyme with it.
Good luck!!
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Re: ALONE
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by harmoni on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 02:29:31 PM AEST
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| SOME DAY SHE WILL COME . JUST BELIEVE ! HARMONI |
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