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Thank You
Contributed by
Jade
on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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WITHOUT YOU I'D BE LOST,
LOST IN A WORLD OF KAOS.
WHERE PEOPLE ARE COLD BUT PRETEND TO CARE,
WHERE THEY TELL YOU THEY WILL ALWAYS BE THERE,
THEN POOF THEY ARE GONE.
WITH YOU I AM EVERYTHING I NEVER THOUGHT I COULD BE.
BECAUSE OF YOU I CAN NOW SEE,
THE GOOD IN LIFE.
I CAN NOW BELIEVE IN SOMETHING,
WHICH HAS ALWAYS BEEN HARD FOR ME.
THANK YOU MY LOVE FOR HELPING ME SEE,
THAT LIFE IS WORTH LIVING.
Copyright ©
Jade
... [
2003-03-15 16:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Thank You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 05:43:10 PM AEST (User
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Jade, this is beautiful..... He must surely love it...
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Re: Thank You
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:46:58 AM AEST (User
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Jade a true warm feeling came when I read this,The love you share with him is much like mine with my husband! Great write! Christina |
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Re: Thank You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:40:51 PM AEST (User
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very loving good write
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Re: Thank You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 05:25:19 AM AEST (User
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Very moving. Shame it isn't longer but it is perfect as it is!!
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Re: Thank You
(User Rating: 1 ) by wazarov on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 10:41:57 PM AEST (User
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people still can`t answer the question"what is life".. life is love and your poem is one of millions that prove it.. thank you |
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Re: Thank You
(User Rating: 1 ) by harmoni on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 02:25:45 PM AEST (User
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PRETTY POEM |
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