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11:11
Contributed by
xxILoveTheSilencexx
on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 02:25:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It's 11:11,
make a wish,
My only wish won't ever come true.
Maybe it's to big, but all i've ever wanted was to be with you.
Forever you told me,
I never realized how horrible a lie could be.
I wished on stars that it could be true,
that I would spend forever with you.
I loved you more than life,
I guess I knew you'd put me through this strife.
Maybe I don't know what love is,
but couldn't we just pretend for this?
But I know what love is not,
so I'll end this sentence with a dot.
What we had was close enough,
we knew when we started that it would be rough.
I don't know what you felt,
but I know this feeling will never leave.
Even if it's just in the back of my mind,
I'll love you forever.
Copyright ©
xxILoveTheSilencexx
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2008-06-26 14:25:41]
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Re: 11:11
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by Southpaw on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 02:31:40 PM AEST
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| Excellent. I have been in those shoes and can relate to the expressions and thoughts of the words I just read. |
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Re: 11:11
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 12:44:59 PM AEST
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I read this because of the title.. the 11 caught my eye being my fav number.. this poem is very well expressed of lost love and very nice flow to it. great job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: 11:11
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 03:22:36 PM AEST
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wow, i love this poem, i can really relate to it
i use to always tell my boyfriend to wish on 11:11
and not knowing what he wished for
but always knowing that i wanted him forever.
i think i wanted him so bad that we just lost what we had |
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