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The Cycle
Contributed by
TundraHydra
on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 03:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I've worked so hard for so little gain
Never wanting power or fame
Just a bit of pleasurable happiness and relief from the pain
It was all a farse, a lie of reality hitting like a cane
I fall for it all the time, makes me wonder if I'm still sane
To keep walking this circular path, this looping lane
Reality smacks me hard and my illusion world wanes
It falls apart in my head and my psyche complains
And so my life repeats itself again and again and again
I go back to work and make so little gain
Never getting the happiness or relief from the pain
It's enough to make one crazy, to shout out something profane
But the cycle never stops, never for the sleet, the cold, the winds or the rain
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TundraHydra
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2003-03-15 15:20:00]
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Re: The Cycle
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 07:27:09 PM AEST
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| this is well written though very sad, live life to the fullest the power of love works wonders |
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Re: The Cycle
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 04:20:14 AM AEST
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I think you have repeated the same rhyming sound too much. Just seems like all the lines sound the same.
Good poem and wonderful emotion though.
sleepless_siren |
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