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Uncommon Sense
Contributed by
Ambivalence
on
Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 05:39:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Most of us now have lost common sense
that we fail to distinguish the difference
between what is good and what is bad
for I witness these trends I cannot understand
as we fornicate, murder our unborn child,
and carry on with out lives without denial,
marry each other, make babies together,
file for divorce, and turn our kids into bastards,
cheat on our boring husbands or wives
to reinvigorate our sexual lives,
habitually smoke, drink, and inject
until our sick bodies become carcasses,
keep biting and chewing and munching
to form a new race of obesity,
invest in irrational decisions
and spend many years in prison,
search the internet as child predators,
conduct corruption as U.S. senators,
kill many innocent lives abroad
because we believe it is the will of God,
and say, “The unexamined life is not worth living,”
but we commit suicide because once we examine,
we discover that this life is not worth living.
Copyright ©
Ambivalence
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2008-06-25 05:39:35]
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Re: Uncommon Sense
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Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 06:58:57 AM AEST
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Re: Uncommon Sense
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Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 06:59:02 AM AEST
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| i absolutely LOVE this!! |
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Re: Uncommon Sense
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 12:48:00 AM AEST
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How very true this is...and I dont think that there arent many out there that cant relate to what you have written here. Brilliantly done.
Rich |
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Re: Uncommon Sense
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by holy on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 03:14:23 PM AEST
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| Thank you for visiting. I am tasting your poem again and again, I love it. |
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Re: Uncommon Sense
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 11:50:46 AM AEST
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a heart touching write on various delicate subjects, written in a beautiful gentle way,
hugs n' love nessa |
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