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Fighting Pain
Contributed by
GregoryGreen04
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Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
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My pain is hidden
For expression of emotion
Is cursed and forbidden
At night, I choke the tears
I bite my lip
And damn my fears
My wounds have no balm
Tears well in my eyes
But never reach my palm
Pain, its hard to hide it
But I am strong
So I will fight it
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Re: Fighting Pain
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 03:35:08 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Gregory!! You have expressed pain pretty well here.. I know..cause I have felt the same way too...
Hope to see more of your work soon...
Jenni |
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Re: Fighting Pain
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by Eloise on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 10:09:14 PM AEST
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| that was an awesome poem,... i hope you like it here and hope to see more of your writing soon... |
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Re: Fighting Pain
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 10:33:27 PM AEST
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| great flow, and laid out well, welcome to ypdc too:) your writing friend, always nessa |
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Re: Fighting Pain
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by blain on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:11:53 AM AEST
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| cool poem... fight on!!! |
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Re: Fighting Pain
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:50:30 AM AEST
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| Well done on this peice,Welcome hope to see more! Christina |
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Re: Fighting Pain
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:56:12 AM AEST
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| Hey, it ends with a positive note. Sounds like there's a lot of hope in getting over your pain. Wish you all the best! |
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Re: Fighting Pain
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:41:30 PM AEST
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great poem, dont i wish it was that easy...sometimes im too weak, or perhaps lazy, to fight it...but i always feel better... welcome gregory to YPDC...lookign forward to seeing much much more...
Lindsey |
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Re: Fighting Pain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 04:14:48 AM AEST
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Fantastic poem. I think everyone can relate to it in one way or another. Keep fighting!!
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