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Oho my love, rest on me......
Contributed by
ravisada
on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 09:41:49 AM in AEST
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Oho my love, rest your head on my shoulder
and let my arms hold around your neck tight
When you are close to me, my heart full of love
and your warm soft words will make me so crazy
When I kiss you, my heart begins to melt
and a bridge of love is built between us with passion
Oho my love, rest your head on my chest
and let my arms hold around your shoulder tight
When you touch me, my body feels full of energy
and your soft love shows me a mystery of life
When I hug you, my soul begins to bend
and a road of love is shown between us with lessons of life
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2008 Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright ©
ravisada
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2008-06-24 09:41:49]
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Re: Oho my love, rest on me......
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 05:29:49 PM AEST
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| Ravi, I got a very warm feeling when I read this piece. Great write...........Mike |
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Re: Oho my love, rest on me......
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 07:37:54 PM AEST
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| A very touching, well thought out write. It does have a few minor gramatical bumps. |
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Re: Oho my love, rest on me......
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by lildancngurl on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 11:29:40 PM AEST
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Very good poem :)
I enjoyed it. |
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