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when a great man falls

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 10:35:29 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

With new love and a sense of sureness in my life i feel its time to warn you
i am not no physic or fortune teller just a man who saw something years ago

We have things boiling over times are ruff anger and racism are about to blow
there is a great man coming into power
he will be the first president to make change but that will not happen
the white man with out heed or warning will try to take this great man down
and when that happens the race wars will begin
we all feel the anger now imagine if he died
the riots and the anger
the crime and senseless death
we should not blame each other for the past
the people who are at fault are dead and the past angers should be left there also
the government will come into and fix the situation
they will create the beast and the beast will be control
we will be rounded up and told behave or die
this time i ask do you have your escape plan
a way to run in case of emergency
a place to hide when the beast comes
i love you all and i wish you well
i cry for you and hope we walk out tighter with hands crossed
and hearts joined
this time will be hard but if we can hide we will be able to take down the beast
take control for ourselves
and bring freedom to the world by taking down borders
lets love and lets build

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2008-06-23 22:35:29]
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Re: when a great man falls (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 06:24:33 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
I pray that never happens but you're probably right.
huggs,
emy

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