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the wish of every goldfish
Contributed by
kelly_may
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Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 07:58:04 PM in AEST
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Round and Round the same old scene oh what i would give to live in a stream it makes me so sad i could scream.
This life so boaring and dull nothing happens just a constant lull.
I sleep eat and swim around yet sadly to this bowl i am bound.
I dream of spaces wide and free and think what life would be like if that was me.
I sigh sadly and continue to swim around this bowl so dim.
An idea has sparked in my head this is what i must do....... i must pretend to be dead.
My owner sighs and scoops me out and flushes me down the loo without a doubt.
Rushing through pipes and bends oh i do hope this ride soon ends.
Im swimming free out in the sea.
Oh i do bet every fish dose wish they were me.
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Re: the wish of every goldfish
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 10:44:58 PM AEST
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Oh I can see how this could be the wish of every goldfish... Enjoyable read...
Jenni
P/S... A suggestion here... you should click on "yes" for spell check when you are posting. That way the Moderators would correct your typos... |
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Re: the wish of every goldfish
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 12:54:06 AM AEST
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| i like it we need humorous poetry to keep the hearts up |
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Re: the wish of every goldfish
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 05:22:09 AM AEST
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LOL this reminds me of Nemo, how cute.
Now I miss my fish I do not have them with me at the moment, though they are in a huge tank *smiles*
Adorable write.
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Re: the wish of every goldfish
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 01:16:35 PM AEST
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| This was very cute, I had a pleasure reading this one :) nice work. |
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Re: the wish of every goldfish
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by mecatpurrson on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 05:15:49 AM AEST
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| Good one, Kelly. A pleasant read. Your love for animals comes through nicely in all your poems. |
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