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Cold Nights and Firelight
Contributed by
MTJohnson
on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 10:24:23 PM in AEST
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Cold night
Moon... not bright
Shiver
Curl up round the fire
Crackle
Stare into transparent depths
An abyss of formless
Shifting
Flames
Pit of primeval longing
Unfathomable
Beautiful
Visceral
Past brought presciently to the present
Reminder of masks shod
Daily lives worn away
Before this
Darkness
Darkness within light
Darkness within life
Light
Life
Fire
Flames
Provider
Reminder
Of beasts
Of pasts
Base and Basic
Instinct and Intuition
The dark within and without
Emotive
Spiritual
Something... Else
Life
And
Death
Creator
Destroyer
Universal
Unique
Impermanent
Transcient
Heat
Survival
Wild
Warmth
Light
Or Dark?
Copyright ©
MTJohnson
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2008-06-22 22:24:23]
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Re: Cold Nights and Firelight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 11:02:05 PM AEST
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| good poem! i liked how you portrayed the fire in this piece. i also liked how you ended the poem with a question. it left me wanting more. |
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Re: Cold Nights and Firelight
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by kelly_may on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 12:30:49 AM AEST
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| a poem and a mystery all in one well put |
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Re: Cold Nights and Firelight
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by SilverRain on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 02:08:31 AM AEST
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Downright amazing.
Loved it
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Re: Cold Nights and Firelight
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 03:47:12 AM AEST
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| A sheer outpouring of poetic prowess, your amazing piece completly captivated me. dragging me into its limbo like depths and tossing me out of the flames exhilerated. you have captured a special moment, staring straight into the flames., its drags us into our memories in a kind of trance. your quick and sharp word usage was brilliant.a ll in all a terrific 10 out of10 for me. this is why i read poetry me friend well done""" |
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Re: Cold Nights and Firelight
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 06:08:53 AM AEST
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Remarkable write!! Great imagery..
Jenni |
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