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The kiss
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 09:15:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Your lips
warm, wet and inviting
hovers over mine
Beautiful
Before I make them mine,
I slowly run my finger
following their perfect shape
They are smooth and soft
feeling them, excites me
making me want to dive in
The moment crashes on me
Can’t wait any longer
My lips spread yours apart
making time stand still
I shudder
with the taste of you
You moan
as your body moves into mine
Make me feel the groan
that comes from deep inside of you
Harder now
Overtaking all my tenses
No inhibitions
No control
Copyright ©
SilverRain
... [
2008-06-22 21:15:52]
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Re: The kiss
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 10:01:21 PM AEST
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Phew!! It just very hot in here!!!
Very intense.... br />
Good write
Jenni |
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Re: The kiss
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 11:03:35 PM AEST
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wow extremely intense and passionate lovely write here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: The kiss
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by moloko on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 01:52:41 AM AEST
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| very passionate, seems so intimate |
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Re: The kiss
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by elle on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 09:44:10 AM AEST
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oh, oh, oh. . . oh
you come so very close
& share the secret
meaning of
the kiss. . .
this is good. elle |
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Re: The kiss
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by lovely_poet on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 07:35:59 PM AEST
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| nice description |
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Re: The kiss
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by deadwriter on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 08:34:38 PM AEST
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Definately a hot write. Great job
Deadwriter
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Re: The kiss
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 05:52:06 AM AEST
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*fans self*
good G R A C I O U S !!
This spills passion all over the freakin page!! DAMN! I love how it gains momentum,
just like the advance of a gentle kiss as it climbs to the ultimate height of all the senses
and ceasing all control over any function other than to satiate this deep inner need.
WELL DONE!!
~Breezy
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Re: The kiss
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by wizard on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 12:01:04 AM AEST
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nicely done,
wiz |
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