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I Saw You Smile
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 07:29:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I saw you smile the other day
which took my breath from me
Memories of yesterday
and how things used to be
Laughter in the moonlight
giggles in the wind
Time we took for granted
can never be again
Kisses in the morning
at the break of day
as raindrops softly glistened
apex of the suns way
Shadows in the darkness
dancing in the sky
holding hands together
looking eye to eye
Tender gentle touches
etched deep within my mind
will stay with me forever
until the end of time
Yes, I saw you smile the other day
and I had to catch my breath
for I still love you baby
even after death
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2008-06-22 19:29:14]
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Re: I Saw You Smile
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 08:24:17 PM AEST
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very sad and expressive write.. I enjoyed this piece
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: I Saw You Smile
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 09:01:54 PM AEST
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This took my breath away! It touched me deeply. I can identify..... Lovely write...
Jenni |
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Re: I Saw You Smile
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by SilverRain on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 09:41:43 PM AEST
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| You did an excellent job. |
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Re: I Saw You Smile
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by jessb3 on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 11:08:50 AM AEST
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| An absolutely beautiful poem! I loved reading it. :o) |
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Re: I Saw You Smile
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by lovely_poet on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 06:12:49 PM AEST
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very nice
amazing .... |
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