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my dream
Contributed by
lovely_poet
on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 11:24:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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i saw a dream
where i was feeling like in heaven
i felt as if iam floating
like a leaf in air
a feeling i never felt
and than i saw an angel
she was so butiful
like from a fairy tale
i felt i am in love
i felt i saw d whole world in her butiful eyes
but she was crying
my hrt started beating faster
i asked my angel why are u crying
she looked towards me
and i felt dat as if i have lived my life for her ooooonly
she said she loves me,but she has a curse
i asked d curse
she said i will die if i kisses her
i said i wanna die in her arms kissing her
i wanna die kissing my love
and i kissed her
but nothing happened to me
and my angel fall on my arms
she was no more
she lied to me '
d curse was on me
i felt as my world is no more
and suddenly i woke up
everything was as usual
but i felt as if i have lost somethig
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Re: my dream
(User Rating: 1 )
by holy on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 09:57:06 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful! I love it. |
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Re: my dream
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by elle on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 10:26:31 AM AEST
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| remarkably gentle & yet also intense. . . |
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