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a vision in white

Contributed by kelly_may on Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 03:26:28 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

a vision of beauty dressed in white as she walks slowly through the night without fear of fright with sparkeling eyes that shine so bright.
as the night dose die the beautiful swan dose fly in to the glowing morning sky.
she soars gracefully overhead the night now dead the golden glow of morning instead.
she glides slowly across the land not an important thought at hand.
as her wings tire and shake she decides she must take a break.

as she tilts her graceful wings down she spots something menecing and brown.
the great bear dose star at the brilliant white glare of the swan in the morning glow as his sence dose go.

the swan flys away she will have to rest another day she flys around and around until from the ground there comes a strange sound...

she turnes her graceful wings round and heads for the ground towards a blue lake where she decided she may aswell have a short brake.
she lands beside the lake and realises her life is at stake landing by this brilliant blue lake had been a huge mistake.
she turns around to see the golden bear simply sitting there.
she is frozen with fear for her life so dear she fears that the end may be near.
the giant bear simply stares down with eyes that glow golden brown.

he had planned to make this swan his feast but that would have made him a monsterous beast.
to eat something as graceful as she would be to discrace he.
the great bear turns and pads away he will find food some other day.

as the swan soars in to the air once more it begins to rain and she will never stop thinking about that great bear again and again

Copyright © kelly_may ... [ 2008-06-22 03:26:28]
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Re: a vision in white (User Rating: 1 )
by mecatpurrson on Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 04:05:04 AM AEST
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Another good one, Kelly. Your descriptions are beautiful and you always manage to convey a meaningful story. I enjoy reading your poems.

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