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Death Seeks the Lower Ground
Contributed by
wheels
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Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 03:06:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Death Seeks the Lower Ground
It puddles… it muddles
Then down
And down
Where mosses grow
And kiss the lips so sweetly tender
The cobwebs rip
In lacy tendrils
‘cross her hips.
Red painted nails
And parted lips
Beckons sultry to follow…
To satin sheets
In passions wallow
Rolling, rolling
Ten miles down
Rolling, rolling
Ten miles deep
In her arms
Where death may sleep.
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wheels
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2008-06-22 03:06:03]
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Re: Death Seeks the Lower Ground
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by shelby on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 08:03:26 AM AEST
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I really loved this write.
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Re: Death Seeks the Lower Ground
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by emystar on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 12:57:13 PM AEST
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Awesome writing.
smiles,
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Re: Death Seeks the Lower Ground
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 12:01:14 AM AEST
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"In her arms
Where death may sleep."
Damn! I read this piece several times and that last bit always gets to me.
I don't know how I feel about the piece itself, but for the sheer power those
two little lines have over me. Interpretively speaking, it's immense, but
poetically speaking it breaks borders where borders lay not.
Amazing post!
~Breezy
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