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Broken Thus My heart
Contributed by
wheels
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Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 02:13:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Shattered…
“Crystal” splinters
Strewn among the rocks
Endless the well of tears
Ever-full
Timeless weeps the stream.
Is not an army
Thus tramples upon the highway
But a loved one…
…onced loved
The thirteenth guest
That thus
Holds the hammer –
Casts the blow.
Glass may shatter but once
Broken souls,
Break more each day
More each day left to break
Broken, thus my heart
Seems not possible
Evermore it breaks
Each day.
Sun may shine.
Tears may flow
Yet, evermore the surf
Will crash
Upon the rocks
Among the “Crystal” splinters
Grinding slowly to sand
Within the turmoil
Grinding slowly
...forevermore.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-06-22 02:13:52]
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Re: Broken Thus My heart
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by Supercreep on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 02:19:30 AM AEST
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| Some beautiful imagery. Especially like the way poem kind of dwindles out with final stanza. |
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Re: Broken Thus My heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 06:04:53 AM AEST
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Wow, the picture you paint can only be seen in the mind from reading wonderfully strung words. Great write...........Mike
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Re: Broken Thus My heart
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by emystar on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 12:42:31 PM AEST
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I hope you know that your writing is incredible.
Awesome.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Broken Thus My heart
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by moloko on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 02:00:34 AM AEST
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| you write incredibly, you transport me into that world. i love it |
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